[영어일기] New the Blog

I seldom have been writing on my blog.

It takes lots of time and need to much energy.

So, I didn't write on my blog regulary.

I realized that the writing is important, and I decided to regulary write on my blog again.

I write about book review and English diary.

One day, my husband said how about change my blog to his blog.

Because his blog already make the money.

So, I have been starting to wirte the new blog.

I dislike new the blog has lots of advertisement and it's complicated than mine.

But I have to used to writing on the new blog.

 

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I seldom have been writing → wrote on my blog.

It takes lots of → a lot of time and need to much → a lot of energy.

So, I didn't write → haven't been writing on my blog regularly.

I realized that the writing is important, and I decided to write on my blog regularly again.

(좀 더 자연스러운 표현) 

I've realized the importance of writing, and I've decided to write on my blog regularly again. 

 

I write about book review → book reviews and English diary → keep a diary in english.

One day, my husband said → suggested how about change → changing my blog to his blog.

Because his blog already make the money → generates income.

So, I have been starting to wirte → I've started writing on the new blog.

I dislike the new blog has lots of → many advertisements and it's more complicated than mine was.

But I have to get used to writing on the new blog.

 

 

1) seldom 은 빈도 부사로 현재시제와 과거시제와 사용. 현재완료시제와 함께 사용하지 않음.

 

2) 'lots of' 는 비격식체 표현. 격식체 'a lot of'

 

3) 과거 특정 시점부터 지금까지 규칙적으로 글을 쓰지 않음을 나타내기 위해 '현재완료시제'

 

4) 'book review'는 명사로 'a book review' 또는 'book reviews'와 같이 관사나 복수형으로 표현

 

5) 'English diary'는 어색한 표현, 'diary in English' 또는 'English language diary'

 

6) 'Keep a diary'는 '일기를 쓰다'  'maintain a diary'는 '일기를 꾸준히 쓰다'

 

7) 'how about' 뒤에는 명사나 동명사(ing)

 

8) 'make money'는 '돈을 벌다' / 'generate income'은 '수익을 창출하다'

 

9) 'have started'는 어떤 행동을 시작했다는 사실을 나타내는 현재 완료.

    'have been writing'은 어떤 행동을 과거부터 현재까지 계속해오고 있음을 나타내는 현재 완료 진행

 

10) 'advertisement'는 셀 수 있는 명사이므로 복수형으로 나타내야 함. 

      'lots of'는 비격식체이므로, 'many'나 'a lot of'

      'than' 뒤에는 비교 대상이 나와야 하는데, 'mine'으로는 부족, 'mine was'

 

 

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I seldom wrote on my blog.

It takes a lot of time and energy.

So, I haven't been writing on my blog regularly.

I've realized the importance of writing, and I've decided to write on my blog regularly again.

I wirte book reviews and keep a diarty in English.

One day, my husband suggested chaging my blog to his.

Because his blog already generates income.

So, I've started writing on the new blog.

I dislike the new blog has many advertisements and it's more complicated than mine was.

But I have to get used to writing on the new blog.